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June 22nd, 2004 @ 2:03PM
Ok this is something very new - and slightly different!
Would like a vocalist that could do this justice - needs a scowl in the voice - however I might just do this myself.
Sense of Time
Wait a while
for the storm
the rainclouds falling has begun
darkens the summer
sunsets another.
Very cold
breathing out
she makes the world in one loud shout
thinks about the leaving
still beleiving
Some sense of time
Some certain deadline
One more mile
clearer skies
you can't see nothing through your eyes
that you don't want to
never a reason to
What's the cost
when you weigh
the leaving when you could have stayed
don't count the tears
they last for years
Some sense of time
Some certain deadline
Pack your bags, take a flight
lost in the thrill of it all
caring about nothing at all
still staring at a blank wall
One more mile
clearer skies
you can't see nothing through your eyes
that you don't want to
never a reason to
What's the cost
when you weigh
the leaving when you could have stayed
don't count the tears
they last for years
Some sense of time
Some certain deadline
Pack your bags, take a flight
lost in the thrill of it all
caring about nothing at all
still staring at a blank wall
Mike - 2004
User Comments
thought-fox
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Date: June 24, 2004 @ 6:03 PM
"don't count the tears
they last for years"
might ring a bit too much of 'Fool If You Think It's Over'
but this is good stuff. I hear a female vocal.
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B1GMAC
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Date: June 26, 2004 @ 10:37 AM
I Agree, but this is a very different song to fool.... - Mike
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NadaVanNie
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Date: June 26, 2004 @ 3:16 PM
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Zepwoman
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Date: June 26, 2004 @ 3:22 PM
I like it. It really has meaning and substance. I would like to hear Mike sing it. I bet it will sound great!! And, I can't wait to hear the good guitar playing in this song too...
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Zepwoman
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Date: June 26, 2004 @ 3:23 PM
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dennytate
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Date: July 3, 2004 @ 8:57 AM
Those are some lyrics. Great work !
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StefanieNewport
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Date: August 14, 2004 @ 8:20 AM
did you sing on it? or was there a collab done? :hmm:
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B1GMAC
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Date: August 14, 2004 @ 8:26 AM
It's still in the can - unfinished. We didn't like my vocal attempt!!!
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StefanieNewport
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Date: August 14, 2004 @ 8:30 AM
maybe i could give it a try?
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thought-fox
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Date: August 18, 2004 @ 5:54 PM
Just read it again. You've got to get on and do this (say yes to Stef - that's some offer!)
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