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Journal - June 22nd, 2004 @ 2:03PM

Ok this is something very new - and slightly different!

Would like a vocalist that could do this justice - needs a scowl in the voice - however I might just do this myself.

Sense of Time

Wait a while
for the storm
the rainclouds falling has begun
darkens the summer
sunsets another.

Very cold
breathing out
she makes the world in one loud shout
thinks about the leaving
still beleiving

Some sense of time
Some certain deadline

One more mile
clearer skies
you can't see nothing through your eyes
that you don't want to
never a reason to

What's the cost
when you weigh
the leaving when you could have stayed
don't count the tears
they last for years

Some sense of time
Some certain deadline

Pack your bags, take a flight
lost in the thrill of it all
caring about nothing at all
still staring at a blank wall

One more mile
clearer skies
you can't see nothing through your eyes
that you don't want to
never a reason to

What's the cost
when you weigh
the leaving when you could have stayed
don't count the tears
they last for years

Some sense of time
Some certain deadline

Pack your bags, take a flight
lost in the thrill of it all
caring about nothing at all
still staring at a blank wall

Mike - 2004



User Comments

Otherthought-fox
Date: June 24, 2004 @ 6:03 PM
"don't count the tears
they last for years"

might ring a bit too much of 'Fool If You Think It's Over'

but this is good stuff. I hear a female vocal. Singing
AlternativeB1GMAC
Date: June 26, 2004 @ 10:37 AM
I Agree, but this is a very different song to fool.... - Mike
AdvancedNadaVanNie
Date: June 26, 2004 @ 3:16 PM
Thumbs Up
DMemberZepwoman
Date: June 26, 2004 @ 3:22 PM
I like it. It really has meaning and substance. I would like to hear Mike sing it. I bet it will sound great!! And, I can't wait to hear the good guitar playing in this song too...
DMemberZepwoman
Date: June 26, 2004 @ 3:23 PM
Pink Rose
Popdennytate
Date: July 3, 2004 @ 8:57 AM
Wow! Those are some lyrics. Great work ! Nodding Very Happy Flower
AlternativeStefanieNewport
Date: August 14, 2004 @ 8:20 AM
did you sing on it? or was there a collab done? :hmm:
AlternativeB1GMAC
Date: August 14, 2004 @ 8:26 AM
It's still in the can - unfinished. We didn't like my vocal attempt!!!
AlternativeStefanieNewport
Date: August 14, 2004 @ 8:30 AM
maybe i could give it a try?
Otherthought-fox
Date: August 18, 2004 @ 5:54 PM
Just read it again. You've got to get on and do this (say yes to Stef - that's some offer!)

 

 

 

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